You didn’t turn around
You just looked ahead
Letting someone else
Hold you instead.
You didn’t look back
Without fear you went
Not a murmur or moan
Or sign of dissent.
You didn’t hesitate
Your confidence clear
Not a shred of worry
Or a hint of fear.
You showed no doubt
Not a falling tear
Or vociferous cry
For all to hear.
You held yourself
With poise and grace
Not a single frown
On your pretty face.
But I was the one
Who let out a sob
An ache in my chest
That I could feel throb.
My tears a mix
Of joy and of pride
For the first time we weren’t
Right by your side.
You didn’t turn around
You made my heart soar
My little baby girl
We couldn’t ask for more.
This made me a bit emotional!! Such a lovely poem and a real sense of mothers pride despite the emotional side xx #KCACOLS
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Thank you! x
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oh wow just wow! I know this feeling – so so beautifully said #KCACOLS
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Ah thank you very much 🙂 x
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BEAUTIFUL!!! Absolutely love this piece.
It captured a mother’s love and pride so well. The voice behind this poem, so emotional, yet so incredibly proud. Wonderful ❤ #KCACOLS
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment 🙂 That was exactly how I felt x
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lovely words. very emotional, made me stop think and re-read XX
#KCACOLS
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Ah thank you very much 🙂 x
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Beautifully captured moment of all the different emotions a parent feels X #kcacols
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Thank you, and thanks for reading x
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Aww this made me sad! Excellent poem.
#ABrandNewDay
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Thank you very much x
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Lovely poem, you really are a great poet. Thank you for sharing with us at #abrandnewday
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Thank you so much, that’s a lovely thing to say 🙂
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This is gorgeous – captures those emotions so well! #prose4t
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This made me quite emotional to read, such beautiful words #prose4t
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Oh, this is perfect. It sums up that bittersweet pride when they become more independent. Lovely x #prose4t
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This is EXACTLY how I felt on Grace’s first day of term! It is perfectly expressed. Thank you for linking to Prose for Thought 🙂 x
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I cried on my daughter’s first day at school, and the last day of her first year (today!) Don’t know how I will survive the next decade or so of the education system, and we have a younger daughter… 🙂
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Thanks very much. It’s tough isn’t it! Will hop across and look at your post x 🙂
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